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Post by †Wicky Wicked† on Jul 15, 2010 8:25:45 GMT -5
Wow I did NOT see this coming ... holy crap Nat. Well I can't say it's not original.
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Post by lordhowl on Jul 15, 2010 11:01:10 GMT -5
Foul I guess round 1 is over. Sorry nat. Breach of etiquette. In a group story you do not kill off a main character like that. "Main character" at the very least, being Brigitte. Brigitte is sort of community property here. I mean, in all fairness, the site is committed to her, Ginger and Sam. Ginger and Sam being already dead, however, etiquette might be bent there. She shouldn't be killed without community approval, i.e. the end of the story. We apparently do need more rules, and I have to go back and read through what we've got, and maybe go into a "second round" now that "play" has been stopped. I've been very pleased what everyone has written. That includes you, Nat, up till the last post.
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Post by Grim The Weird on Jul 15, 2010 11:08:27 GMT -5
ill include myself in the story next round. maybe a inosent victim of a attack or just slipping on a banana in a hall way lol
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Post by epiklow on Jul 15, 2010 12:09:27 GMT -5
Lmao wtf just happened. I'm so confused as to why Nat is saying all these things.
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Post by lordhowl on Jul 15, 2010 13:13:56 GMT -5
Lmao wtf just happened. I'm so confused as to why Nat is saying all these things. In his latest edition to the story, he had Brigitte being decapitated. But that's a foul, so I'm overruling it.
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Post by Grim The Weird on Jul 15, 2010 14:22:10 GMT -5
he claims that the virus became self aware and decided to kill its host.
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Growing Tail
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Post by nat on Jul 15, 2010 15:09:38 GMT -5
It could happen... probably.
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nat
Growing Tail
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Post by nat on Jul 15, 2010 15:43:04 GMT -5
ill include myself in the story next round. maybe a inosent victim of a attack or just slipping on a banana in a hall way lol In all fairness I did bring Ginger back. Even if she is kinda... well... I dont really know what you'd call her, but she's there none the less.
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Post by †Wicky Wicked† on Jul 16, 2010 6:30:55 GMT -5
I don't know what to say to all the above, but I'll guess we're now all gonna wait for the second round. I really like this group story idea so I hope we can continue soon.
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Post by lordhowl on Jul 18, 2010 1:44:49 GMT -5
The group wrote more than 1600 words (not counting Nat's last entry). I'll be reading through it today, and I'll decide how to continue, and what rules and guidelines we can maybe have.
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Post by †Wicky Wicked† on Aug 1, 2010 4:09:00 GMT -5
Hey I was wondering when are we gonna go on with the group story again ?
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Post by lordhowl on Aug 1, 2010 11:59:32 GMT -5
Hey I was wondering when are we gonna go on with the group story again ? Thank you for reminding me. I have so much on my plate right now.
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Post by sophielovessam on Aug 2, 2010 13:48:36 GMT -5
I'll hopefully join in with this round.. if i have time
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Post by lordhowl on Aug 5, 2010 16:58:05 GMT -5
I'm now going through the story, editing it. I'll re-post it soon and open it up for another round.
About the editing:
Some things are necessary for consistency. In Europe, people use single quotation marks (') for quotations, whereas those on the other side of the Atlantic use double quotation marks. (") Quotations within quotations are also reversed depending on continent.
I haven't dropped any plot points or descriptions made, though I may add a few details. I converted some things into the active voice ("she was running" to "she ran") and cut some wordiness, and I've dropped redundancies.
After I'm done, and I repost it, I'll also have some rules and guidelines. I've never done this before, so I'm learning what should and shouldn't be done as I go.
Anyway, that's all. Should be up by the end of the weekend or next week at the latest.
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Post by epiklow on Oct 7, 2010 8:53:27 GMT -5
Hey, how's this going?
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